ammiemarie
  Junior Member

Thank you! Crazy enough, I wrote this when I was 15 years old. I appreciate your feedback greatly.

Thank you so much for your feedback.

Thank you for the kind words.

Thank you! If you ever have the chance to witness hummingbirds sharing nectar with bees, there's quite a cat-and-mouse game they play in the sky, constantly chasing each other away from their food source. And, in the most unlikely way, even sparrows enjoy nectar, too. more »

I appreciate the storytelling and imagery you have depicted in your poem. I haven't studied much of Sylvia Path's poetry, but I feel like I know her and sympathize with her tragic demise. What a bittersweet, beautiful piece of work. more »